A New Version of Orpheus

Once their was a man who was a great music player. Ever time he played it was a nice nosie that it was powerful. But one day when he was walking back stage a beautiful girl come out. Then Orpheus started saying nice things to her. Then all she did was simile. It was like love at first site. One evening he was playing his flute with his wife. Then she left the house and walked in the front lawn. A man was rubbing his back with a tree. She then saw him and the man tried to grab he. She ran but she tripped. Orpheus heard her scream and ran to her. When he go there she was died. He carried her back to the house and started a funeral. But he did not give up he ran to the hospital were she was. But the mean doctors didn't let him take her home. So he played for him to let her free but didn't work. He keep playing and playing until the doctor's wife said to let her go. She begged and begged. The doctor let her go but under one condtion. He can't look back at her. So they both went all the way out the hospital. When he was out he looked back and he broke the rule. So his wife was gone. After that he never played good music. He made a died bad nosie that women hated. So the women ripped his lims and throw them into the Sea.